Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Spring? (Villanelle)

Dey say is spring
but me eh feeling a ting
just cold breeze nipping.

A whole 12 degree swing
from minus five trembling
so dey calling it spring.

Sun bright, out light and shining
so two layers thick I wearing
but still cold breeze nipping.

De grass greener and ting
an dem small, brown bird well singing
so dem saying is spring

but once past four in the evening
I have on my long JLo covering
and still I feeling cold breeze nipping.

I wondering if we have different skin
and I not just talking about colouring
cause dem saying is spring
but cold breeze still nipping.

1 comment:

Ann Althea Nedd said...

Great stuff. Quite interesting. Kepp on writing.